Re: Adventuers in Wildspace! SJ e-comic

That looks *great* Steven. I'd love to see what it would look like without 
the words.

No crew is visible on the deck of the Squidship. If the ship isn't supposed 
to be a ghost ship, it might be worth adding some people. You might need to 
draw these by hand, so that they don't look computer generated.

The planet the ship is orbiting has an atmosphere that seems far to 
transparent. The part of the planet that faces directly towards us is OK, 
but I think the edges of the planet (near the horizon) should be a lot more 
hazy. I'd imagine the effect to be similar to looking through water at 
different angles. I don't think I should be seeing that much land detail 
beneath the clouds when I am looking through the atmosphere at an angle.

Is the planet supposed to be barren? I don't see any blue areas and that 
seems to suggest there are no seas. The texture on the surface is great, but 
I'd suggest trying to suggest sea and mountain snow, river deltas and other 
features if the planet is supposed to be habitable.

But apart from those minor niggles, this picture is fantastic. It 
practically lends itself to being a cover for a BtM netbook.

Is there any chance you could do some portrait artwork soon? Your existing 
artwork seems to all be landscape and that isn't going to fit onto the cover 
of a magazine (or comic) as well as a landscape picture would.

Embedded links don't work very well on the list. Both your links were 
mangled when I got them. Next time I suggest you just send the URL (without 
any quotes or other punctuation) in on a line by itself - like this:
http://www.silverblades-suitcase.com/wildspace/index.htm

I hope that your health holds up. Look after yourself.

David "Big Mac" Shepheard
Virtual Eclipse Role Playing Club
http://uk.groups.yahoo.com/group/virtualeclipselrp/links/d20_system_001071937434/Spelljammer_001071430476
http://www32.brinkster.com/virtualeclipse/

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From: "Steven" <steven.james.1@??????????.??.uk>
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Sent: Sunday, July 08, 2007 5:26 PM
Subject: [SPELLJAMMER] Adventuers in Wildspace! SJ e-comic


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"http://www.silverblades-suitcase.com/wildspace/index.htm"http://www.silverb
lades-suitcase.com/wildspace/index.htm



just starting, in fact, just did the intro graphic, lol.

Plan on creating Sj e-comic, done in 3d then converted to “cartoon” art,
I’ll put up cartoon, black and white and 3d versions



I have no idea when I’ll be able to do each episode, all depends on my
health etc.



:-)



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