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From: daniel brough <gwydion9@???????.com> Date: Thu, 6 Sep 2001 03:09:24 -0700 Subject: Re: Beyond the Moons stuff to take over to Compendium?
Howdy all, First off, I took a look at the new Compendium site and IMO it looks great. :) I was delighted to see that it now includes a Chronicles and Tales section, and that my own novel appears there. Thats very cool to see added and Id love to see all the other fiction thats on Beyond the Moons appear there as well. :) Well, Ive heard it bandied about that wed be afforded the opportunity to cull the Beyond the Moons site for stuff thats instantly usable and good enough to be labeled official and put on Compendium. Still not certain whether theres any official countenance for this, but what the heck, heres a bit of my dream list of things to take over to Compendium, starting with crystal spheres. This is also my chance to review and provide feedback to the authors of all this great stuff (I didn't realize how much good stuff there was until I started scouring the site) A word about how I think they should appear (and this is just a wishlist, so this may not be possible) It would be great if there was a map showing all the spheres of known space, inclusive of everything out there, with plenty of blank and unnamed spheres scattered throughout so that as more fans come up with future spheres, theyll have a place to put them that'll fit well. The Big Three she probably be somewhere on the outskirts, away from the center of most spelljamming action. Id have Flit do the map, because so far his map of the spheres is the most impressive Ive seen, what with being able to click on the sphere and immediately jumping to a description though Tilaurin's comes damn close and has that same feature, and perhaps Noah Bonebrake does the best interior sphere maps. One thing that the map should make clear is the Flow Rivers - which way they flow, and how many days journey it is between spheres. This would be a good section to add to all sphere descriptions as well, under the heading flow rivers detailing the routes to and from the nearest neighbor spheres. Which would lead naturally to an understanding of intersphere trade One more thing about how I think things should be linked for maximum usability. I think each item should be considered in the light of how does this relate to everything else on the site and then linked to the other items on Compendium which might have something to do with it. For example, if theres an NPC who happens to be a General of Scro forces stationed on Gamero Base in Moragspace then we should be able to find links to him under the NPC section, as well as in the Gamero Base description, as well as in the sphere description of Moragspace, as well as under the general power groups section of the Scro (assuming that there is such a section detailing the powergroups like Scro, IEN, vodoni, illithids, etc, and I think there should be) Okay, the spheres and my votes: The Big Three. Well, of course this is a natural, and must appear in some form or other. In my opinion, the general rule of thumb should be if its a sphere that tsr published in any official product, it should be open to anyone to add to it, as long as the Council deems the work good enough to be considered official whereas if its a sphere that a fan completely created and published online, then said creator has full rights to expand/develop it, although of course he can throw it open to others to expand upon as well But of course the Big Three should be open to anyone to expand. Ill go into specifics. Greyspace - Not too much appears here, but everything that does is first rate. The missionaries of Celestian, the dragon raider, the wyvern, and the Grey Feather ships, and of course Pearball as part of the Grinder. But there is a great deal more that could be detailed in this sphere. Krynnspace Nothing at all really appears here, but it obviously should appear on Compendium, so theres a great deal to flesh out, especially now that the setting has gone to Fifth Age. One thing that all these spheres should have is a good sphere overview section that at least refers web readers to official products detailing more Realmspace I doubt anyone would argue that Paul Westermeyer is anything other than a treasure. His treating and updating of Realmspace is nothing less than excellent, and the whole of it should be included on Compendium and made official (so to speak) Kudos to Noah Bonebrakes maps of this and greyspace. The Maelstrom Here comes Adam, and watch out! :) Always a favorite of mine, I cant think of anything hes written or detailed that wasnt at least as good as the official product lines. The Maelstrom gives at least brief descriptions of seven spheres, though only three are really detailed. But those three are richly detailed, Banesun, Twilitespace, and Tyrspace. Any dm could adventure endlessly in Twilitespace alone, so much material is there for him to start with. I think of course that the Maelstrom in its entirety should be put on compendium, the other crystal spheres to be detailed and fleshed out later (ideally by Adam, since it is his baby, but if he wants to give permission to others to fill in the blanks, that would be his right as well) The Vodoni Empire Like the Big three, these spheres are all the creation of official products, so they should be open to expansion by anyone that wants to take a crack at it. The vast majority of spheres are left undetailed, but they of course should be included on Compendium for further detailing. Tim Goff has done an admirable job in detailing Golotspace, Lostspace, and Passarspace. I really like what hes done with all three, Golotspace (slowly acquiring the name Dragonspace) foremost. He wrote it so that the spheres could be played as having been invaded/conquered by the vodoni and also included provisions if the dm wants to play it as if the vodoni never existed (swapping their role with the scro) I think that per under the dark fist the vodoni should stand as the official conquerors (though a nice update might include one or more of the spheres of the vodoni empire having been invaded by scro and some nice battles might occur between them and the vodoni). That aside, these are also very nicely done and should be included as official spheres. Astromundi Cluster Obviously this is another official sphere. Ive never cared that much for it, but the expansions on BTM are definitely up to par and should be included. Bralspace I love Bralspace, its richly detailed and very well done. Another triumph of Pauls IMO. I do wonder whether this sphere should be open to expansion to everyone or not though; I think its Pauls baby. Though of course Bral itself should be open to others, but there isnt much expanding to there anyway. Cloudspace Not too much here, but what there is is good. Should definitely be included Grommspace Another good Paul creation. Put it in, nuff said. :) Omnispace/Solaris Lots of expanding that could be done for each, but for fans the Eternal Wanderer series they should be a familiar sight. Splatterspace I think this one is a particularly clever idea. Tauruspace Well done, well detailed, Paul Westermeyer. Need I say more? Terraspace Im not faulting the work on this one, I just think the idea is more a novelty than something that most SJ campaigns would find an asset. I wouldnt make it official, or if it is made official, make it very far away from Known Space. Webspace Obviously from its nature this would be an open sphere to everyone. I like most of the work in it, though there is a great deal to expand upon here. Witchlight This may be my favorite sphere in terms of atmosphere. Didnt Noah also have a short story to go along with this sphere once? I seem to remember someone detailing the origins of the witchlight marauder, and I also remember it was one excellent story. Wait after all this time, Ive finally found it, posted right there in the rest of the sphere description! Hurrah! :) There should probably be a link to it from the Chronicles and Tales section as well though Now, for the spheres that are linked from BTM. Well, they vary dramatically in usefulness, and maybe its just that Im so accustomed the the way spheres are organized on BTM but for me some of them are hard to navigate and Id prefer to see a workup of them in the same organization as the BTM standards. That said there are some very good ones. Hyrkulspace stands out (no secret Im a fan of Noahs) as does Agraspace (Tilaurin has done some great things with it, and also I like his mapping of the spheres). And Magincia is a richly detailed campaign world, complete with a summary of the sphere for Spelljammer and a listing of portals for Planescape. The link jumps to the campaign world itself, which is the focus, and you have to scroll down the page to get to the Spelljammer-specific sphere stuff, so I think perhaps if its to be linked to it should be the other way around go to the SJ part first, but thats a small quibble. Alantaenspace was difficult for me to navigate and find anything, and Stormspace looks great on the link page, but again I cant seem to find anything when I try to navigate the site its on. Nilespace appears to be a dead link. At least my browser cant bring anything up on it. Moving to other places of interest: Adramis I like this waterworld, its well done. Maybe it could be placed in Webspace, as one of the undetailed planets. Almalamut This is a pretty well thought out concept, but obviously its not just a random place that can be put anywhere. It needs its own sphere, and alludes to at least four other spheres that neighbor it. Probably should be put on the edge of illithid-controlled space as it alludes to interactions with that empire. Argentum I like the concept and the look of it, but it needs more detail. Also Im not certain how well it fits in Realsmpace, which is where its set. If its decided to put it there, there should also be a link from the Realmspace sphere to this station. Sample Asteroid Empire Simply put, the name has got to go. This is an excellent work and set in the Grinder in Greyspace, (and should be included with that sphere IMO) but it cant have a name like that. Erenia Well done base, and it should definitely be included. Maybe it can be placed in a specific sphere, but it definitely should have a link to it from the Imperial Elven Navy as it is a training base of theirs. Farming Asteroid this is really just a jpeg, not a description of a place. Its a good picture but shouldnt be included under this section Flim Flam Interesting concept that could use more fleshing out. Gamero Base - Oh yeah, Adams work is excellent as always. This should definitely be included. Also it should probably be linked to from Moragspace (assuming that sphere is detailed) Gray Fang I like the concept and work on this one. Maybe it should be in or near Vodoni controlled space, as if was once a base of theirs. Now its neogi-owned, and should be linked to that empire as well Hethla Good stuff High Temple of the Sun Took 2nd place in the unique space base contest, certainly deserves to be included, and maybe a suitable sphere should be found for it to be in, to make it even more official Ildirs A well thought out flatworld. Include it, maybe find a home sphere for it. Leasanar - I like this former dwarf now drow stronghold very much, plus it also took 3rd place in the space base contest, that alone should mean it would be included. I also think with a little thought it could be placed in an official sphere. Lharn An excellent planet, both in shape and form. I like the idea of evil elves and good drow/goblinkin. It should be included. Lionheart Theres probably no need for me to say it, but I still think this is the most impressive accessory Ive ever seen. Of course, Im a bit biased, I wrote a story about it after reading it the first time. IMO it should definitely be included, and linked to the Imperial Elven Navy, as it is their foremost base. Miraburg 1st place in the space base contest was this entry, and it is excellent. It is suggested by the author that it should be set in the Grinder or some asteroid belt similar to it, I say go ahead and put it in Greyspace as the author suggests and link to it from there as well as being in the unique places section. This of course is a no brainer to include. Nikarrochezzit This one is not merely a base but really it orbits a unique planet as well, and it alludes to perhaps needing its own sphere. Still its very well done and should be included. Shackle I liked the name of this one particularly, and the concept of a chainman base stationed in the phlogiston is really cool. I think it should be included. Thunderhead This former dwarf stronghold now orc base is pretty well thought out. Maybe it could be placed in one of the orc/scro dominated spheres. Treladine Outpost Er, I dont like crossovers or approximations to sci-fi worlds myself (like star trek deep space nine, which is what this is modeled on) Theyre a nice novelty and some dms might want to incorporate them, but I think if they should officially exist it should be far from known space. Twins of Tempest this is more an astronomical feature than anything else. Its a very cool effect, two gas giants orbiting each other with a lightning storm blazing between, but it isnt really a space base. Should be put in a sphere somewhere (webspace?) Valendoar This planet is a good concept but could use more fleshing out and perhaps a formal placement in a sphere somewhere. I liked the tie-ins to the EIN and it should be linked to the EIN Wayports These farming islands can be placed pretty much anywhere. Their description is pretty general. Wolfhaven Cool name, needs a bit more fleshing out, and its set in a sphere called Seaspace. Could use more info on the sphere as well. Xenix I liked Xenix a lot, its a good writeup of a planet and the elevator is pretty cool too. I think it should be included. Whew, thats just a tiny fragment of what there is to harvest from BTM and make official! But this post has gone on long enough, so Ill close - Sebastian _________________________________________________________________ Get your FREE download of MSN Explorer at http://explorer.msn.com/intl.asp
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