Re: Gromspace

Paul Westermeyer wrote:
> 
> Here's a quick rundown on Gromspace.  I have done a map for it, in style
> much like the Bralspace map. Let me know if you want it, _off list_:)
> 
> Comments and criticism welcome:)

	Sure.  Looks pretty good and reasonable.  I have a couple of
suggestions:
* I'd advance the Hadozee culture somewhat, giving them simple cities. 
Ewok style, with vast villages among the trees.  Or, if you've read Star
Wars, Heir to the Empire (or one of the other books...I can't remember
where it appeared), make it like a wookie city, where it looks far more
primitive than it actually is...:)
* howbout a large group of hobgoblins, with many canivorous apes, as a
major "evil" race, roaming about the planet in a vain attempt to
escape.  Survivors from a fleet that crashed during the UWI.  
* said fleet of hobgoblins tried to get the hadozee in the war on their
side; the hobgoblins needed a fresh supply of troops to attack an
outpost in another sphere, and they needed the few ships the hadozee
owned to join up.  Hadozee refused, allying instead with the elves.
* Question on Grommon: they have only 30 houses?  How big is a house?  A
village, group of villages, or an entire nation?  That number seems
awfully low for such a large planet.
* Another question: do any of the worlds have moons?

	All in all, pretty good.  I think I'll add it to my list of spheres to
use:)

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